This is going to be my very first post for term 3 blogging, I'm aiming for a good start.
So here we go, the poem:
we slept with our boots onThey unloaded the dead and maimed right before our eyes
They washed out the blood, we loaded our ruck’s and then took to the skies
Over the mountains, villages, and valleys we flew
Where we would land we had not a clue
Bullets are flying, the LZ is hot
We’re leaving this bird whether we like it or not
30 seconds they yelled, Lock N Load and grab your shit
Get ready to go and make it quick
My heart is pumping adrenalin through all of my veins
I run as fast as I can through the lead rain
The noise is tremendous, terror I can’t define
The only reason I survived that day was divine
I kept pulling the trigger and reloading and pulling some more
You do what you have to do, with that I will say no more
We fought from the valleys to the mountain peaks
From house to cave, to car to creek
Dirty and tired and hungry and scared
We slept with our boots on so we were always prepared
Those majestic mountains so steep, so high they kiss the skies
The Hindu Kush has changed so many lives
Up the mountains with heavy loads we trod
Who knew hell was so close to God
Beauty and terror are a strong mixed drink
So we drank it like drunkards and tried not to think
Good men and bad men, Mothers lost son’s
Everyone loses their innocence when they carry guns
Washed in the blood, and baptized by fire
I will never forget those who were called higher
They say blood is thicker than water, well lead is thicker than blood
Brothers aren’t born they’re earned. In the poppy fields, the tears, and the mud
And when I get to heaven to Saint Peter I will tell
Another Paratrooper reporting for duty sir, I spent my time in hell
steve carlsenThis poem has run-on lines, the poet wrote it like telling a story, describing the scenes, the feelings and the deeper meanings. All hidden under the daily-used words.
Right from the first sentence, we are brought into the bloody and harsh environment in war. Words like "dead" and "maimed" proved this.
From the second line onwards, the action begins. We can tell that the speaker is a soldier. As the poem progresses, we know that the soldiers had never had a choice, they listened and obeyed what was ordered and sometimes knew nothing before and plans. The phrases "we had not a clue" and "whether we like it or not" are the evidence. The author mentioned the places they passed, "mountains, villages and valleys" to show the distance and confusion.
In line 7, the actions were finally triggered off. The alliteration "Lock N Load" explained the preparation, it brings a "manly" feeling. The way the author replaced "and" with a single letter "N" capitalised, we could tell the firm rule and the speed required.
The rapidity was further elaborated in the next few lines when the speaker got into warfields. The line "My heart is pumping adrenalin through all of my veins" showed the speaker's energy and nervousness at the same time, while it makes the readers excited and read on. The phrase "lead rain" is an exaggerated but appropriate way to describe the dangerous situation, what was falling and pouring was no longer water, but bullets. Other phrases like "noise is tremendous", "terror", "pulling the trigger", "reloading" reiterated war scenes.
In line 18, my understanding of the title is proved right. "We slept with our boots on so we were always prepared" this shows the discomfort and the stuggle. War even deprived the soldiers of rest, always staying tensed made them both physically and mentally exhausted.
There are people who believe this place called heaven, the fair god was said to bring peace, all the beauty was related to her. In the poem, the mountain they were fighting on was personified to kiss the sky, meaning that those soldiers were so close to heaven. But the author stated another fact, heaven and hell were close too. People may dream about going to heaven after death, but is there any difference since that brings them to hell too?
Another fact during the war that is scary is stated in the line "They say blood is thicker than water, well lead is thicker than blood". In warfields, metal stuff like guns and cannons decides the lives of people, it has far more power than any relationship.
In conclusion, apart from the cruel sides during war shown in the poem. The speaker's personality was shown. He does not know where he is fighting or who he is fighting but fights solely for his survival. Poet's description of the speaker is one that is unprejudiced. He does not make the speaker seem like a patriotic character, and neither does he make the speaker seem like one who is uninvolved in the action. The speaker is made to fight aimlessly, and he is so numbed to war that there is no longer any emotional response to the killing, almost like a zombie.