My Own Micro-Fiction
Soulless Tear
Cold-blooded! Giving inhumanely trainings.
Top alertness. Thunderous voice. Deadly stares. Cruel punishment. All too much to disobey. Ready to sacrifice anyone. Dread of all soldiers? Definitely!
War came again. He did the country proud. But...
kneeling in front of the tombstone, with his wife on the mind, same stern look, he dropped his first tear...
3 Comments:
Is he alive? If he's thinking of his wife, why does he drop the first tear? Is it because of all he's been through? Post-traumatic stress disorder? Very poetic!
May 24, 2009 at 10:40 PM
I like it!
May 25, 2009 at 1:32 AM
ROFL.
May 29, 2009 at 6:59 AM
Post a Comment
Subscribe to Post Comments [Atom]
<< Home