Sunday, May 24, 2009

My Own Micro-Fiction


Soulless Tear

Cold-blooded! Giving inhumanely trainings.

Top alertness. Thunderous voice. Deadly stares. Cruel punishment. All too much to disobey. Ready to sacrifice anyone. Dread of all soldiers? Definitely!
War came again. He did the country proud. But...

kneeling in front of the tombstone, with his wife on the mind, same stern look, he dropped his first tear...

3 Comments:

Blogger Deckard said...

Is he alive? If he's thinking of his wife, why does he drop the first tear? Is it because of all he's been through? Post-traumatic stress disorder? Very poetic!

May 24, 2009 at 10:40 PM

 
Blogger 1A118 said...

I like it!

May 25, 2009 at 1:32 AM

 
Blogger hwajin said...

ROFL.

May 29, 2009 at 6:59 AM

 

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